Tuesday, September 14, 2010

What did I learn? to describe better

What did I do well? write descriptive writing

What can I do better next time? use more alliteration

2 comments:

  1. good self assessment egg. mabey make your assessment a bit more descirbdive.

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  2. Well done Egg
    What you did well. You had a lot of writing and you did a goal
    What you could do better next time: You could try and make your writing about a topic like pirates

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