Sunday, November 28, 2010

Monday, November 15, 2010

RIVERDALE WRITING

I remember saying man I don't like school but one year later that all changed school was the best cause we would play games meat great friends and it became so fun I wanted to go early very day so I would my bags and go I'll always remember all the great times at Riverdale also jobs like road patrol hall seating and special trips like camp Electives and loads more I would like to thank all the teachers, Mr Mcallum , Mrs Peck Karina Karin TC and all my friends BYE!!!!!

Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Speeches

videoSpeeches

Written and Oral Language

We are learning to:
  • Present material, conveying meaning clearly and accurately
  • Write and speak, expressing personal viewpoints, sequencing ideas logically

Speech Topic:


Self Assessment from video

Speech in front of class

Success Criteria:


Speech Writing




My speech followed the hamburger technique and was logically sequenced
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The point I was making was easy to understand
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My speech contained research
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My speech had voice and was interesting
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My speech was in my words
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My big idea comes through strongly
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Presentation




I enunciated my words clearly
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Terminal consonants


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Ts and ds in the middles of words


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Swallowed my goobies first


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Seperated my words


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My voice was loud enough
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I learnt my speech off by heart
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I used expression in my voice
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I used enough volume to be heard by all
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I used eye-contact
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My speech was not too fast, not too slow
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My speech was between 2 and 3 minutes
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My presentation materials supported but didn’t repeat my words
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Total:


11



Novice – 5 Apprentice – 6 Practitioner – 11 Expert – 14

Self Assessment after Video


Self Assessment after Speech