Wednesday, June 23, 2010

My Writing


What did I do Well?
I used punctuation and I used some voice so thats what I really
did well.

What did I learn?
I learnt if your not enjoying your writing you should not be doing that
writing so always chose some writing that you enjoy.

What can I do better next time?
I could use a bit more adjectives and similes and Next time I should really enjoy my writing.



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